Looking for some help about etsy shop

I'm on Etsy too, very recently I might add. See the link in my signature. It takes the right mood for me to write creatively, but analyzing writing on a technical level is no problem. Take your shop description, for instance (ha).

Welcome to my shop, Here you will find only hand made items for sale, you will find mostly home decor items such as candle holders, fretwork pieces that hang on the wall, and some other things. If you are interested in something custom that is made of wood let me know I am capable of doing a lot of things. If you have any questions comments or suggestions of what you would like to see for sale here let me know, all comments are welcome. Thanks for stopping by, and have a great day.

There's a lot of commas used where there should be a period, and other places where there should be a comma but there isn't one. And the opening could be more enthusiastic, so why not an exclamation point there? The second and third sentences both include the phrase "you will find". The repetition makes it sound redundant, so I'd change that. Switch up "goods" for "items" to avoid repetition. Remove the phrase "a lot of things" where it appears. Too vague. Here's how I'd rework it.

Welcome to my shop! Here you will find only handmade goods for sale, mostly home decor items such as candle holders, fretwork pieces that hang on the wall, among others. If you are interested in something custom that is made of wood, let me know. I am capable of doing a wide array of custom work. If you have any questions, comments, or suggestions of what you would like to see for sale here, let me know. All comments are welcome. Thanks for stopping by, and have a great day!