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Just started a new website and I need your guys opinions.

I haven't loaded all the stuff on it yet. I just want to see what you guys think about the layout and looks. Does it look nice, does it have a nice appeal?

Let me know what you think, good or bad.

www.thewoodenboxes.vpweb.com
 

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Site loading time seemed normal to me. Overall look of the site is pleasant. Let us know when you have the rest of the site loaded. I like to see how things integrate with each other.
 

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Load time for me was fine.

Since the site isn't finished it's hard to tell what the order form is for but if it's what the name suggests then I would remove it and get a shopping cart. People are used to the "Add to cart" type buttons and having to fill out an order form may be a turn off. How would you order more than one item?
 

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Th Times Roman (?) text on the home page is a little difficult for me to read - I understand that non-serif fonts such as Arial are better suited to the web, like on your Chip Carving Page.
 

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I like the overall look. The text being centered appears a bit strange to me, especially the very short lines such as "not regretted it since" and "like it".
 

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So far it loads OK for me and looks nice. There are several English and punctuation errors, such as:

The angle of the cuts play a huge part in the outcome

I would write 'the angle of the cut plays a huge…' or 'the angles of the cuts play a huge part'

After a period, you should leave a space between the period and the next word.

How the light falls on the piece creating the shadows, is what chip carving is all about
I don't think you need the comma in this sentence.

There are a few others, mostly in the fundraising section. I can point them out to you if you like.

Good luck with the website!
 
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